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Review:DetectiveMenace says:
TWO MORE (and an epilogue)?!? I'm going to be so sad when this is over! :(
They were so close, but then that damn nail had to ruin everything! But, then again, their plan wasn't too solid to begin with. They're not really cut out to be detectives like the Trio. :)
Marlene is so desperate to get the girls back that I'm afraid she'll do something reckless, like try and rugby-tackle the Slytherins. Although that is a pretty solid idea...
I love the birthday present Lily gave to James. Not the pen, the chocolate, of course.
Another wonderful chapter...BUT REALLY?!! Only TWO (and an epilogue) left!

Author's Response: Yep, just two :) To be honest, I will be quite happy when it's over -- being able to tick the "completed" box has got to be the best feeling ever on fanfiction, imo.

LOL... Harry, Ron and Hermione are hardly detectives, so it's no surprise Lily and James and Marlene aren't either. And yes, the nail! Ah, that was a snag in their plan that they hadn't forseen.

It would give it away if I told you what Marlene did, and if you're right or not, ha. And the birthday present... somehow, I prefer the pen over the chocolate. The pen, James gets to keep, but the chocolate's in his stomach in a heartbeat, so there's not really much to it, is there?

There are only two chapters plus the epilogue left, but I hope you continue to enjoy the story, until the end. Thank you for reviewing.

~Soraya~


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