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Review:Ali4077 says:
Wow this is a powerful and well written chapter...

Anyway I'm WolfieAli from the forums. :) I have a different name on here. Finally I'm getting round to reading and reviewing all my challenge entries, so sorry it's taken so long.

Your description of Rakshasi was very detailed. You could really picture the image of him in your mind, even if it wasn't a nice one. It makes the piece more visual and helps you imagine the story in your head.. which immediately makes it more interesting.

My review's a little jumbled in order but I'm just bringing up the points I loved most even if it's the end, then the beginning and such :) I go on a lot about last lines in my reviews, because to me they're the most important. It's the last part of the story you read, so the point that sticks in your head and can sometimes sum the chapter up as whole.

"What do death eaters dream of?" just makes you want to move onto the next chapter and read more. :D It definitely grabs you as a reader which I guess is exactly what the writer wants.

This was a brilliant chapter, definitely unlike anything I've ever read before. It's what makes me so pleased I created my challenge, it's opening me up to stories I wouldn't ever have considered reading before.

Great job, and onto the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey! Sorry it's taken me forever to respond to your lovely comments. I'm really happy that you liked my chapter (even if the genre and style was a bit challenging)...thank you so much for recommending it in your blog! ^_^

Yes! "What do death eaters dream of?" is supposed to be catchy, but it's also part of the mystery. Everything is very confusing for the first few chapters, but things will begin to get clearer soon...I didn't want to show how all the characters were related too quickly. ^_^

Thank you for reviewing!
xoxo wenderbender

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