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Review:the_edge_of_love says:
This is a lovely oneshot-- as you wrote, I find it to be a wonderful moment in the early RoseScorpius days.

I think you managed to include everything here: love, uncertainty, fun, family rivalries and of course, the happy ending.

What I liked most is Hugo. I never pictured him like that (and I've never read a story with such a characterization of him) but I was pleasantly surprised. He definitely gives a hint of humor to your story.

Also, I liked the change in Rose' ideas. At first, she's worried about her family but, when she realizes that she really likes Scorpius and that she has to live her life as a teenager. It was a nice touch.

I mostly liked this quote:
"Do you think..." he asked hesitantly. "Maybe we're only in this because it's so stupid?"
I believe it says a lot about their age.

Good work!

Author's Response: hi! so glad you liked this!

i had never imagined hugo before, but after writing this i really want tot write more about his life! poor watermelon!

so glad you liked it - that quote says a lot, i think, too!

yay! thanks for reviewing!


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