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Review:rich_blonde marauder23 says:
Awh I love this! It was so cute! I just knew that it was going to turn out like that in the end ;)

I loved it, it was really cute. I hate when people don't leave reviews, and so I'll leave you one :)

There were no noticeable grammatical mistakes, it was all nicely written.

In the beginning when Fred says that Martha was sixteen and falling apart, I thought he was talking about a girl! And then he said: easy, go buy a new broom. I was like, what a jerk! Hahaha :)

The quote works really well will the story, by the way!

Anyways, great story. I loveee James/OC stories, they're the best :)


Author's Response: Aww thanks :) Haha, yeah I knew it was going to be a predictable ending but hopefully in good way! Thank you so much for reviewing, it made me smile! Phewf on the grammatical mistakes thing, I'm fairly sure my word processor doesn't pick up on them as well as the Windows ones. Yay! I'm glad that line caught you by surprise! I had a lot of fun writing this. I'm glad you think the quote works too! Shucks, thanks :) Alex.

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