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Review:BrightStar says:
Hi, BrightStar here with your review!

Sorry for the delay! Intersting spin on lily/james here - and its nice to see lily not being hyper perfect!

id like to see more context in the story - this happens a year before she dies, smack in the middle of a war. just a thought.

im looking forward to reading more, please feel free to rerequest - this chapter has taken my interest, and i feel for lily already :)

Author's Response: Hello, thanks so much for the review, really appreciate it.
I wanted to make Lily more realistic and relatable.
In this fic, yes, she is in the middle of a war, but she won't be dying until she's had harry etc. So a few years left, I've taken that little artistic liberty. :)
I will re-request.
Thanks again,
sweetnothings


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