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Review:BrightStar says:
Hi, BrightStar here with your review!

*Beats the living daylight out of Ron for standing up Luna*

Ahem. So, this is my third attempt at reivewing this chapter, im such a fail! However, that means ive actually read it quite a bit, which is great - i actually got to focus on all the little details!

The detail in the scene in the pub is what drew my attention first- i was really impressed that you took the time to make the scene fuller - he had to repeat his order to tom, the git beside him everything. Im far too content in writing "then this happened then this happened then this happened" - i need to take a leaf out of your book here!

George here is excellent, and rons reation to the luna thing is so RON - except the end, that is. Even so, thats reasonable, this is new, hermioneless ron afterall!

his reasoning for his standing her up is done v well too, "that was what he deserved" really drove it home!

so many things i could say, but ill just keep it short and sweet - excellent job, the amount of time i made you wait for both chapters is ridiculous, so moving on now to chapter 3!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave such a sweet and lengthy review, it really means so much to me. :)

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