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Review:Flavia says:
I'm gonna make a crazy, wild, insane stab in the dark here and say James fancies Astrea :D I dunno, call me a nutter but I think I might just be right!

The draught of peace bit was really amusing, not to mention "oh captain my captain." I like it when spells and potions make characters act silly :) Another really good chapter, there's the right balance of romantic tension and witty banter. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Ha! Well, since I can't quite give anything away (but it is pretty obvious, so I might as well), that crazy, wild, insane stab in the dark of yours is definitely close to the mark! :P Although, I don't think James realizes it just yet, but eventually he will. As far as he's concerned, it's all brotherly and in the name of being mates. He just needs a bit of prodding.

Ha, thanks! I'm glad you liked those bits. (The "O Captain, My Captain" always makes me giggle.) Poor Astrea, she would've never admitted something so serenely if not for being under the influence. (; Thank you again for your lovely comments! They really inspire me to keep writing and push for direction in the story. (:

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