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Review:adluvshp says:
hello there.

i had already left a review for this one but since you deleted, i am leaving one again.

a nice start. again a mysterious air is built around which is quite good. the writing style is good, i can see the plot building up. the characterization is done nicely though more description on percy and more interaction between audrey and percy would be better. that can of course come in the later chapters.

good job all in all.

cheers!
AD

Author's Response: Yay, thanks for rereviewing. There will definitely be more Audrey/Percy awkwardness in the coming chapters (though sadly not in the next one...it'll have to wait until the one after that!).

Looking forward to hearing what you have to say about the next chapters!
xoxo wenderbender


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