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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Lovely story. You captured this moment of Molly's really nicely. She is such a homely and motherly type and you never really see her fighting. You can see the change in her, a hardened attitude, whilst still maintaining the essence of who Molly is.

I love your use of language and the similies that you have used. The tragedy of the whole war really comes across through the eyes of a mother, watching her children fight.

You chose a good place to end this story, basically at the point where Molly launches herself back into the battle. It seved as a nice colcusion.

I've read so much of your work now and even though this is an early piece, it is still really good. Well done.

Author's Response: Hey Jacqui!

I'm happy you got a chance to review this!

I have been in such an indecision about continuing the story into the fight but after this and some other reviews I think I'm happy where I ended it, so thank you!

:)


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