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Review:Asi=Honest reviewer says:
I must admit that nothing then my love for Harry Potter and my wife (who is awesome fic writer) could make me read a fanfic. I am quite sceptical to those who try to change, rearrange and modify Jo's stories.
Now to this fic..Well, the author of this fic obviously managed to open to us Lily's character and did it so well that for me it seemed that this Lily was the same as Jo's possible Lily would be. I liked the way Lily's emtions were presented before going to Hogwarts.I could see Harry in her , I don't know why but I felt that she is his mother and that was wonderful! James and Sirus bits were quite well done as well, because that necessary friendly but arrogant outlook we had in Jo's stories were kept. The only not really good point of this chapter was lack of discriptions, I mean we weren't told what kind of weather it was , was it cloudy or sunny. We weren't told much about newly introduced characters . But at the same time there were some nice ways of discribing characters (part where Sirius was mentioned as shorter then James , or Alice's hair ) . All in all , story worths reading !!! :)

Author's Response: Aww...thank you Asi! =D I'm glad you liked it =D The one thing I was worried about was that Lily was too like Harry..so I hope I didn't overdo it. I am terrible when it comes to describing..but I like the way that I did it. I am very concious about over describing =/
Thanks again =D *hugs*


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