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Review:Ali4077 says:
Although short.. this is definitely powerful. :D

Just to let you know I'm WolfieAli from the forums and I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner, so thank you for entering my challenge. :)

I've not read much Ariana before, well to be blunt I read my first Ariana fic earlier, but I've enjoyed this one, it was from a different angle. I liked the mention of how they don't call her by name anymore, it shows how they've detached themselves from her.

Your last line was definitely very powerful. I go on about last lines a lot but if they're good, then they sort of tie up the entire piece.. if that makes any sense. It's the last thing you read and for it to end well, just makes everything much better. This last line says it all really, it was too late for Ariana.

I enjoyed reading it very much, thank you for entering my challenge and sorry this review is so short. I'm not the best at reviews. :D

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought so, it means a lot. ♥ And your review was wonderful, thank you! :D

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