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Review:Miss Lily Potter says:
Hi! It's been nearly two months since you requested, I'm so sorry. I kept getting caught up in life and things, BUT I'm here now to review. ^_^

I liked this chapter. I'm still a bit confused, but it seems intentional. I like Nydia, and I like the Vanessa Greyback thing.

It seemed a bit like you were telling what was going on, as opposed to showing, but it worked with the story and didn't hurt it too much.

At the end, though, it's Kedavra, not Kadavra. That's about the only issue I had with it...

Overall, a good chapter. (:

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