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Review:amelia rose. says:
I hope this improves. Harry potter is not american, respect the linguo. Don't rush, take time to thread a plot and you'll develop in your writing. Cut down on the speech, seriously. You've shown promise, but I've been let down. Your descriptive seemed good, include more of it! You can't skate with fanfiction, you have a lot to try live up to! You have shown dedication to the story from the amount of chapters, though quality not quantity. Sorry if you think I've been harsh, you can email me if you want to to discuss anyhting, just ask for my address. Take care, and bear in mind my tips, You could be OWL standard.

Author's Response: As I said earlier, I'm American, and it is easier for me to write that way than to try to "fake" English dialog, colloquialisms, etc.

I write the story as I feel it should be told; if you aren't enjoying it, then move on to one you do like. I don't need the same criticisms repeated on every chapter. The story is already completed, all I have to do is post it, and I'm not going to change it unless I feel it's necessary.

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