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Review:amelia rose. says:
Still not catching me. Too much bland dialogue, try to make what dialogue there is more active, let it be more chatty and humorous between friends, emphasized James' cocky attitude, Sirius' bravado, the pain at separating from his parents. Your writing words not a story, I hope the next chapter improves.

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