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Review:inevitable_bliss says:
I am completely blown away by this story, truly. As far as fanfiction goes, I don't think I've ever witnessed an author branching out this far and truly making the Harry Potter world their own (not to discredit JKR).
At every turn, we readers are presented with new information, more questions and no answers, and I absolutely love it.
I do wonder about the Vampires in this latest chapter, though. Clara mentioned that if they killed her, the Cryllians would come, but Izak seemed to have no fear of that when it came to Torren. Then again, Izak would probably be praised by the new regime for getting rid of a leader of the Watch. Speaking of which, I wonder who will take Torren's place as the fifth leader?
The sheer ambiguity of your cast of characters is shocking and perplexing, and it definitely makes me want to read more. As for Albus and James, it seems to me that they both took up different things that their father stood for and it all just spiraled out of control from there; at least, that's my interpretation for now.
Anyway, I can't wait for more updates!

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