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Review:LadyMMalfoy says:
Hi! :D

You have got an interesting and original plot here and I'm really loving it!

However the chapter dosen't really flow and there are a few grammar mistakes - I would suggest getting a beta to help you sort this out.

This isn't normally the sort of thing I would read as I prefer to read canon Next Gen and I can't say I'm really pleased that the twins are called Hermione and Frederick when Harry and Ginny's two younger children are called Albus and Lily. I'm hoping there is an explanation in a later chapter as to why they are called that.

LadyMMalfoy
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Author's Response: Hi Mi Lady. First I would like to say thank you for taking the time to leave a review. I decided to name the twins Frederick and Hermione because I thought it would be something different to what everyone else was doing. Has you can tell I'm not quite a conformist when it comes to alot of things. Please do read on, I've been told in other reviews that the story does get better. I've been thinking of going over the first chapter again and correcting any mistakes. Thanks once again for taking the time to leave a note.

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