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Review:magicalsquib says:
Hey, I realise that you have already finished this story but I have only just started reading it now, so if you don't want to do anything about what I say then I don't mind but I will tell you anyways :) .
I find it really odd that Ginny would say that she hated Harry when she obviously loves him.
Also I think that Hermione would need some help to find her parents and its a bit odd that she would leave Ron so short a time after they first start to go out.
Also I doubt that Harry would be in such an odd state that he would simply ignore everyone he loves and 'died' for, especially Ginny, even if he does feel responsible for the deaths that occurred.
Anyway, I am really liking the story! But I hope the next chapter is longer.
Love, Magical Squib xxx

Author's Response: Hi welcome to the story. The characters are all acting a little weird right now. They just finished fighting for their lives and I think they all need a break. To your points...

Ginny- is a young girl, 16 and she'd have a ton of emotions boiling inside her. There is more to come on why she acted this way.

Hermione- I think if Hermione was smart enough to hide her parents she's smart enough to have put in a way to find them. A lot of fanfics have them going as a group, but I thought after the mgical worl kind of tore her family apart, she might just want to be alone with her mom and dad.

Harry- lets not forget Harry knew he had to let himself be killed as a sacrifice, not scared and thinking he'd never come back. Then add in the deaths of Remus, Tonks, fred and his well known penchant for taking on grief that isn't truly his and I think its feasible. MAybe a bit dramatic, but still feasible.

Hope you like the story and thanks for reviewing.

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