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Review:raznilla says:
Aweeesome story! I love it.

Really strong descriptions! They knit in with the story, helping with flow, which is great! I had a very strong mental image throughout the whole thing, which is something I look for when reading a story. Good job with that!

Couple missing commas! 'She sure will dear' . There should be a comma between 'will' and 'dear.' And in the sentence 'Hey there little one,' there should be one between 'there' and 'little.'

Great story :) I'll definitely be watching for more!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
I'm so happy you liked the story! :)

Woohoo! This is my first time attempting to write a story in 3rd person so I'm really happy that its going well! :D

Whoops! I'm going to change that straight away! Thankyou for pointing them out, I really appreciate it! :D

Hopefully next chapter should be written soon :)

Thankyou again for the review and your help!! :)

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