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Review:Deltaris says:
There are quite a few grammar issues and run-ons in this chapter. Nothing a thorough proofing or beta couldn't fix.

I do like the twist on James/Lily that you've taken. It's not their typical, cliche relationship that most people write. I'm interested as to where their relationship is going to lead them with this story.

Author's Response: Hello,
You're right, I'm in dire need of a beta, i really hate proof reading :)
I wanted to make it quite original, I'm a bit tired of reading the same dynamic - James pining over Lily. Thought I'd shake things up a bit.
Thanks for reviewing - means so much.
Sweetnothings
xx


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