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Review:Omer says:
Lovely, lovely story. I read it all at one sitting and just finished it. Cried a lot lol.

I love your Snape, he's so canon it just makes me want to squeal! I don't enjoy stories that involve young snape usually because most of the Snapes I've read are too OOC, but your Snape was great. I simply love how you stuck with canon, I wouldn't have been able to-- just because I'm really weak when it comes to Snape.
Perfect ending, completely suiting and even though I was heart-broken I don't think I'd have liked it so much if it ended the way my fangirl side wanted it to lol. I love Capella as well, a very interesting character.
I hate to be that person, but I do have some critique. There were parts earlier in the story that I felt as though there was too much of her thoughts rather than dialogue. Which is of course reasonable, considering she wasn't the most sociable person in the world, but still I think there were parts that were reallydragged out where I was resisting just skipping a few lines. I'm glad I read them though, they were very interesting lines, but I do think thet coud have been a bit shorter.
There was also a lot of her thinking in the middle of dialogues and actions which was sometimes distracting I felt as though those thoughts would have probably been better as after-thoughts; though I think that this is part of Capella's magic (pun totally intended), that she was able to analyse things as they happened.
Nonetheless, this is one of the better fics I've read that involved Snape; not a lot of writers succeed in portraying him very canon-ish-ly, and the plot was very easy to be sucked into. As I already mentioned, I did read it all in one sitting.

HOLY CRAP THIS IS LENGTHY. I'm so sorry, I'm a very lecturing sort of person. lol.

Best wishes :)

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