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Review:Roots in Water says:
Interesting twist with Lily and Snape- a good one. I like that they will get their happily-ever-after, especially Snape. He will finally have in death what he didn't have in life.

I'm also glad that you decided that in death you wouldn't have the burdens of guilt- that would have made a miserable eternity for many, especially since they probably couldn't absolve the problems -or think to- by just visiting the wronged. It would be interesting to have Sirius visit the rest of his family, to see what their interactions would be like.

Random thought: what would Voldemort's afterlife be like? Would he find his life put into a different perspective? How would he spend eternity?

Another thing: I cannot imagine spending eternity alone or even with just one other person. I cannot even begin to imagine eternity. I wonder how Sirius and James and the rest of the world handle it. What will/do they do? (Just wondering if you have any thoughts on that...)

James and Sirius' relationship feels as though it's progressing very naturally- not too quickly at all.

Another great chapter! You write very well and, I feel, give just the right amount of detail and feelings.

Author's Response: I think spending an eternity is scary because how do you know what you will do/talk about for that long? Maybe it would've been easier to deal with if my afterlife was different, if there were billions of people wandering around that you can stop and chat with...

Thank you for reviewing. :)

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