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Review:Roots in Water says:
You left me a review a long time ago and today I finally clicked on the link leading me to your author page. Boy, am I glad I did.

The summary immediately caught my attention and I couldn't resist clicking on it. I wasn't disappointed.

Your short segments really emphasized the brokeness of his life and how scattered his life is now. Your characterization was brilliant. I love story. You really showed Draco's progression realistically, as well as the rest of the characters. The Death Eaters were very human, I felt, and the lawyer had a very human want for revenge- and then regret. It was really well done.

There is nothing I can think of that would improve this story- I really enjoyed reading it. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Firstly - oh my goodness, thank you so much! I can't believe you reviewed so many of my stories! It's so lovely to click onto your author page and see that :)

I'm really glad you like this, as it's one of my personal favourites. I'm glad you like the segments - that's the effect I was trying to achieve, but I know some people feel it's just jarring - and it's reassuring to know that the characters seemed realistic. It's so easy to write Draco badly, especially post-war Draco, so I was very wary of him coming across as a tortured soul or a completely changed man or whatever.

Wow, that's probably the highest compliment anyone can give, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this!


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