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Review:choufleur says:
I really enjoyed this, although I am sad that the first chapter went and so my place of first reviewer was stolen from me. Sigh. Anyway, I love some of the bits of description, especially of the mirror and the memories flowing from the giver. Rakshasi is spectacularly creepy and I slightly dread his reappearance, I have to admit! I am interested as to how this is linked with the first chapter but I'm sure we will find out in due course!

Author's Response: Yay beta! I'm sorry about that too. Thanks so much for your feedback and review. The edited version of the prologue is still in the queue, but should be updated soon--and I hope my Britspeak is improving! You can tell me when you see chapter 2...

I know! Rakshasi creeps me out too, and I wrote him! Unfortunately, he is a rather important character, and will therefore reappear. Oh dear. His role (and that of the mysterious English death eater) should become clear once chapter 2 is up.

Thanks again for reading!
xoxo wenderbender

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