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Review:charlottetrips says:
Original!! At least to me… Char here from the Forums, here with your review.

I Like Like Like this concept of Gilderoy Lockhart struggling to recall what had been Obliviated. I just did a story which explored this BUT this is not about me, it’s about you.

And Gilderoy is still Gilderoy—full of himself. Gotta love it.

Is “under abundance” technically correct? Well, I don’t care too much because you know what I thought of that phrase? Brilliant. That’s what I thought.

What does this mean? “ joined up writing” I think I must’ve missed something because it doesn’t make any sense to me. Oh wait. Never mind, looked Gilderoy up in the lexicon and it now makes sense! *sheepish grin*

I liked the woman’s speech. It was a bit cold-blooded but impassioned though cruel but understandable, given the circumstances that brought her to that point.

I love that this has got some humor in it as well as this drama of Gilderoy trying to remember who he was. And also that he feels a little anxiety about the possible glimpses as to who he was. It brings to mind the fact that there is a little good in all of us.

The conclusion sums it up pretty well. You had me liking Gilderoy again, feeling amused at his egotistical attitude but also pitying him, especially at the end.

Another great bit of writing thoroughly enjoyed!

xChar

Author's Response: Thanks once again for your review! Haha- perhaps I'll go and read your take on Gilderoy after he's been Obliviated.
I have no idea about the correctness of "under abundance"- it sounded right to me, but I'm no language genius. (And thanks for the compliment).
I'm glad you liked the woman's speech- my thought was that there were people out there who lost their memories because of him- so what happened to them?
I'm glad you liked it and especially glad that you found the conclusion satisfying.
Thanks so much for reviewing!


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