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Review:justonemorefic says:
Nooo, Harry! D: She just wants to apologize! Don't be dead! (oh how silly that sounds)

I remember reading your other stories in past review tags; you've really improved! :D I like how you characterized Lily; she seems very real and I can feel her grief. I can also quite understand her predicament and how growing up with two talented brothers and a famous father shaped her like this. There's a lot of stories that make Lily an unlikable brat, but I think she becomes sort of a likable one, who understands her mistakes in this. There are a few points where it does seem a little overdramatic -- just a few too many adjectives and flowery words so the same sort of mood drags on -- but that's a minor problem

Good job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliment about how my writing has improved. I like Lily and I find her quite often to be an unlikeable brat too. I wanted to show her as a bit more of the shy girl who found growing up in such a famous family was not that easy. Thanks again.

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