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Review:Phoenix_Flames says:
Hello there! I'm here with your review as requested. :)

You seem to have a good story that's off to a great start here. You really did begin the entire thing very well. I enjoyed your descriptions of the snow outside and the entire evening.

You really did a good job with your descriptions of things. In everything within this first chapter, the way you structured your sentences and the words you chose gave off a real magical or whimsical feeling I should say. I had a good vibe while reading just by the way you structured everything. If that makes sense. :D

So well done with that!

I like Annabel's character. She seems very sweet and kind, and I like that this is the kind of girl Sirius has crossed paths with. I also think you have done a fine job with his character. He doesn't seem too cocky in the way so many people over write him, and he doesn't seem too much of anything. He seems like a wonderful Sirius Black who also has a soft side, a side we knew he had but people tend to forget. You did a great job with this.

Excellent opening chapter. I can't wait to see where you take this. :)

Drue

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