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Review:Snapdragons says:
D: This was sad! (captain obvious) I was hoping for a happy ending... but yeah, nope.

I loved the subject, and it was heartbreaking. It reminded me of the whole "you never know how much time you have" and how we should appreciate our family before it's too late.

Lily's emotions were pretty powerful and complex here. The grief, regret, guilt... but it also felt as though she was proud of herself for choosing something that would make her happy, which I was glad about. I liked how she chose her own path and independence, though I do, of course, wish that she could have done it without estranging herself from her father.

Having Harry be in a grave was a complete shock for me. Totally had me there! Didn't see it coming at all. I was sort of hoping he was there listening, and then they'd make up in the end, but I think this makes it more powerful.

Sad, but well done. Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, this is a bit of a tear jerker. Lily does have a lot of emotions going through her which is understandable given recent events. You completely got everything that I was trying to put across. Thanks for the lovely review

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