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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
This is a lovely first chapter, Tasha! You write descriptions very well, and you don't overload the reader with them either.

I like the little bit of Pippa's characterisation that we get from this chapter. So far, though, she does seem a fair bit like Rose, but I think that's just down to the chapter being so short. She doesn't seem as sure of herself as Rose and seems to need more reassurance, than fiery!Rose ^_^

I saw no mistakes throughout the chapter, so there are no corrections that need to be made. It's a definite "like" from me for this. Well done for such a hooking first chapter. I can't wait for others :)

Lorren.

Author's Response: Hello Lorren (:

Thank you, and thanks for reviewing! It really is very useful, as I've realised since writing on here.

Writing Pippa as similar to Rose was fairly unintentional, but in the coming chapters I hope to differentiate them a little, along with another girl I want to introduce.

Thanks again, and also for looking for mistakes; I don't have a beta and I don't really want one, but it's hard sometimes to see mistakes in huge chunks of text. There are some things that even Word can't fix.

~Tasha


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