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Review:ilharrypotter says:
Hello there! ilharrypotter/Polkadot from the forums with your requested reviews. Sorry it's taken so long - an extended vacation and serious drama took over my life for a bit there. Oh, summer. :) I'm glad to be back to reading this story though!

I feel like I dwelled on this a lot before, but I love how canon-ly you portray Draco. Even in the beginning of the chapter, he seems exactly like the Draco we know, love, and hate.

Example: "Here he truly learned that life was just a matter of looking out for his own interests, and that anything else hindered his survival." Such a Draco thing. In my opinion.

I also really like how you've mixed the Muggle world with the magical world. A car accident, a drunk driver, mixed with our magical characters - it's really the kind of modern thing we expect, but a lot of the time, writers don't mix the two worlds - not realistically or, more importantly, meaningfully. It's a fresh change of pace for me to read something that does in this sort of way - and it's very well done, as well!

You asked at the end if Harry was believable - oh, he most definitely is. Very canon, very realistic. You shouldn't have to worry about that!

-Paige.

Author's Response: No probs.

I breathe a sigh of relief that Draco is still relatively in character (as much as he can be in a Dramione). Thanks.

I've always been fascinated with how these teenagers grew up with all the advancing technologies and magic and it's been fun to mix it (albeit subtly but still). Maybe I'll pursue this line of thought in a different story.

Thank you for the kind words on my characters. I was a teeny bit worried ;)

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