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Review:momotwins says:
Very nice! You know I had to come read anything from Molly's POV ;) I think you did well. Very emotional writing, your description is really evocative. It has a very World War 2-ish-ness to the description, the word choice, that I have always thought fits well with the second Voldywar. I absolutely believe these could be Molly's thoughts during the battle. I love the descriptions of Ginny's and Bellatrix's hair, actually, and I hardly ever like discussions of appearance so that really is saying something ;) It's as if Molly is superimposing her knowledge of the two personalities onto their hair. Neat idea.

I know this is your earliest piece (my first HP fanfic was a Molly POv also!), and having read your later stuff, I can see how you've progressed as a writer. This is good, but your writing has gotten a bit smoother with practice. I think you did a great job with this, I really liked it. :)

Author's Response: Yes, a Molly story. Loved writing this and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Heh, glad you liked the hair descriptions too. Like every girl knows, hair does have a life of it's own :)

Thanks for reviewing this! It is one of my faves.


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