Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:nightingale14 says:
ahhh, nooo! James was SO going to confess that he liked her but then he brings up the whole 'Mrs. Norris enjoys mauling little children and then putting them in her porridge for breakfast!' thing!
I bet he's in denial.
Stupid James. Sex god indeed.
You know, it was really cute that he was worried about her and then she couldn't stop 'looking into his eyes and counting his freckles and then they were holding hands'...all that mushy gushy fluff duffy stuff (:D) They are SO going to make such a cute couple! I wonder what her Yaya has to tell her anyways...hmmm...and how many days until Christmas break? I am a bit confused. And as for the Quidditch match-GO GRYFFINDOR! And if I were Astrea, I would have gone out with the Ravenclaw bloke just to make James mad because who makes a girl run four laps around the Quidditch pitch just because he can't stand that the girl he likes but is in denial about just might not like him? Idiot.
Really nice job, and are you Greek? I mean, there are so many food refrences (I happen to love Greek food; souvlaki ahoy!) and Greek words and what gives the story a really nice feel.
9/10 and update soon!

Author's Response: Foiled! To be honest, I'm not even sure myself just what it was James was going to confess, but I suppose we'll find out eventually, won't we? *smirk* And where did you get children in porridge for breakfast? That's way funnier than what I had in mind with Mrs. Norris. James is just a tough nut to crack, but he'll come round eventually. (With some prodding and baklava.) And I'm glad you enjoyed that little bit of fluff! Oh, and to clarify, they're almost out for summer holidays! And yes, I'm of Greek descent, though, sadly, have never been to to Greece. Thank you so much for your utterly fabulous review! There was lots of giggling on my part while reading this.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 409
Submit Report: