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Review:Aderyn says:

I think it's pretty unique to write a story from Dean's perspective. Not many authors focus on his character. This is a nice overview of his relationship with Ginny, again, I think you incorporated the song well into this story.

I liked the ambiguity of who the narrator might be through most of the fic. I might suggest taking out the part where Dean names himself and names Ginny as the girl he loved, but lost. From the description of the Quidditch cup final, it's pretty obvious who they both are, and I think the ambiguity fits better with the style of this story. But that's just my personal opinion

I'd be interested to read more from Dean's POV, if you ever choose to expand on this fic.

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