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Review:charlottetrips says:
Wow. This was just absolutely beautiful. The wording of everything, the feelings and thoughts and possibilities that were explored...loved all of it.

I love the comparison of Hermione feeling second best to the fact that that is how Ron grew up: feeling second best to his brothers, to even Harry at one point.

I like how you clearly make Ron regretting his decision to break up with her but feeling that he couldn't get back with her because she deserved more. That is so Ron. Before they were lovers, they were friends.

I'm glad that she was able to get closure and move on in the end!

xChar

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so glad you liked it. I hadn't actually realised the comparison between Hermione feeling second best and Ron's childhood but you are so right. It always surprises me when people point out things that I did completely unintentionally.

I find Ron quite hard to write. He isn't my favourite character so I tend to have a habit of really making him the villain by exaggerating all his flaws. I tried not to do that here, and I kept him pretty honest rather than making him a cheater.

xJacqui


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