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Review:Mad Hatter says:
A really delightful beginning! It was creative (I hadn't heard of those potion ingredients doing that before), it established firm characterisation AND there were explosions. What more does a chapter need? I'm very excited to read the next chapters -- so few people write about Cho Chang, let alone anyone related to her. She seems to be terribly unpopular with fandom, which is sad.

I also loved the subtlety with which you gave clues about when it was set, what people were like, how the legacies of the books have lived on -- the comment about the map and Beatrix's comment that Fred used to be more fun makes me think that this is a year after James has left, and if I could be bothered to do some maths that would mean that I could figure out when it was set. Which is lovely. I enjoy knowing those sorts of things, even if they're not strictly relevant.

Gosh, I'm just rambling now. Point is, I loved it a lot and I'm going to stop typing so I can read the next chapter.

Author's Response: HELLO! I think this is a delightful review :D Any review that uses 'delightful' is rather delightful.

Explosions and biscuits and characterizations! I suppose this chapter is missing shirtless men, alas. I recall there being something about how fandom is horrible to Cho Chang and that was pretty much the only reason why Bea ended up a Chang. That and I wanted her to have a rice cooker ;D

I try to be schneaky with my details. I end up weaseling a bunch in during edits as the story gets longer. It makes me look like I planned it all along to new readers :D Bahaha. I love knowing the details about time especially (Appearance, I'm a little lazy with. But time, you'll see me throwing around weeks and days and evenings and whatnot).

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