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Review:Ink Laden Quill says:
Boy, I really liked the end of that. I was worried that it was either going to be terribly tragic with a missed connection (which I would have understood), or terribly gushy with the "perfect" ending (which I, too, would understand). This being said, however, I think you found a very happy medium that worked with the characters.

As for the story on the whole, I'm a big fan of your characterization of Teddy. I think I wrote about this in a past review - so it's there somewhere. Overall, though, I've enjoyed reading this because it's well written and I can stand to learn a few things from it.

So thanks for sharing and best of luck with your future projects!

Author's Response: The missed connection idea did come to mind, though it would have meant adding another chapter in China where Teddy comes to see Rose. :P I never planned on a sad ending for this story, though there were many opportunities for it. However, going overboard with a happy squishy ending would not have suited at all - don't think I have the capability of writing such a thing. *hides*

Happy medium is always better, if possible, and I'm very glad that I found it for this story. Rose and Teddy had to have something happen between them by the end, but it couldn't be a head-long leap into true love - that would undermine the realism I'd been attempting to capture with this story.

Thank you for liking Teddy! It's wonderful to hear compliments about him, and I'm glad that I got him right, especially when so many other characters in this story gave me endless problems with characterization.

Thank you very much for reading, enjoying, and reviewing this story! I've appreciated hearing from you! :D


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