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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I liked the story. It's nice to see people as not perfect since they never are and I really liked the conversation that you had between Aaron and Lily. I thought this to be a good beginning

I just wanted to mention i found a few things to be fixed. the first is “You do you think you are?” should be Who do you think you are and the second "Trust me, I never coming back again." should be Trust me, I'm never coming back again. nothing huge but thought i should point it out. Also this sentence is quite a mouth full:

“Lily what is going on?”as he walked in to the flat from that morning he found me going around our flat and pulling anything that had come from the pass 3 years as a result of the relationship that had just fallen apart. maybe just have it as lily what is going on? as he walked into the flat. and then say something like He was curious because he found me going around and pulling anything that was a reminder of the relationship that Aaron and I had. something like that.

but really other then this it was a great job and this didnt take away from your story. I really enjoyed it.

~Slytherinchica08~

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