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Review:thelandbeforecookies says:
Hello! Here with your request review. :)

Um... whoa. Just whoa. Great opening chapter- I can't wait to find out more about Raven and the Fire-Eaters. It's very dark and mysterious, and I love that. Raven is so wonderfully sarcastic and cynical, Vanessa is almost a bit too much with her loudness and threats, and Nydia is surprisingly sweet.

There's no grammer mistakes - kudos! The plot isn't just spicy- it's like a full on Indian meal! And I like that. :D I mean, I'm a bit iffy on the whole black werewolf thing. But I suppose it gets explained further into the story? Really, though, you've opened up brilliantly. You've told some of the back story - some, not all, and I can't wait to find out who 'he' is, and what happened to Raven's twin. Good job.

(:

Author's Response: Hmmm, did I mention Raven's twin? I suppose I did if you caught it. Well done for good reading, you caught a lot of things most people don't!

Thanks for your awesome review :D


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