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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
This story is like poetry. I love your metaphors and imagery; it flows so smoothly and it's all so incredibly beautiful. The characters are dark, too. I'm trying to figure out who is darker, Teddy or Victoire. Teddy's running now to get his revenge on her, to silence her once and for all because she no longer has a hold on him. But in these flashbacks, her hold on him was so powerful that maybe she deserves a little bit of revenge.

Some of my favorite bits:

I want to rush up to you and kiss you so earnestly the breath leaves your body and you die.
-WHOANESS. So intense.

Great resounding leaps that let me fly over puddles and around corners: a dark shadow flitting amongst the light of the moon and the orange of the streetlamps and the white of you.

I am coming.
-I love how smooth these lines flow, how poignant they are. I can see the flashes of light and the memories just like I'm Teddy himself. You're very talented with making even the shortest, most concise lines powerful and filled with meaning. Very vivid.

Passion should believe itself irresistible. It should forget civility and consideration and all the other curses of refined nature.
-So true.

I gaze at you with a hint of a dreamy smirk and lust-filled eyes as you heartlessly consume me.
-Wow. Such cold passion!

And now, I shall eagerly skip off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Sarah! Thanks for your lovely review! :D

They are both monsters. Victoire has Veela blood in her, as well as her father having some werewolf symptoms. In short, they are both monsters. His is more instinctive - the werewolf cannot control his own actions like when he is in his human form - whereas Victoire is much more a praying mantis/black widow sort of a girl. Vicious, manipulative. A cow. I think that's why they clung to each other, in a way.

Glad you like those bits and thank you thank you for your lovely comments! ♥ :D

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