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Review:LilyFire says:
Aww.I love it still. It's increadbly cute. This can't be the end, I want to know if anything happens!
I have a question for you: Are the young mans eyes green or brown? In the first chapter, you have them as green, but in the others they are brown...
Keep writing Joop!
~Lily

Author's Response: This isn't the end! I just haven't had that much time to write lately - I am aiming to get something written in the next few days, hopefully something by the weekend. I have this story planned out so it is just a matter of finding time to sit down and continue to write. I have started Part 4, though! It just needs to be finished.

Sharp eyes on your part! His eyes should be brown, the green was a mistake - I have corrected it in my notes but I haven't updated the changes to the archive version. I will soon, though. Thanks for reminding me!

I can't believe you gave me three reviews, that is so sweet of you. Thanks so much!
Joop.


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