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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi Jacqui!

That was beautiful and bittersweet. The emotion ran clearly throughout the whole one-shot and your imagery and words were poetic prose.

I loved this line "The grounds sparkled as the moonlight and the starlight intertwined in the cool night air, reflected back off the remnants of a rain shower that had passed over during the night." Actually just the whole paragraph really. I know you're just talking about the weather but still. Lovely.

Harry is so Harry here, even if it is just Ginny talking to herself. She did love him and she certainly would've grieved for him for a long time had he died that night. But I think your take on how she would heal is very real and something that would happen.

This was wonderfully written!


Author's Response: Thanks Char. I glad you enjoyed it, even though it is, as you said, a bitter sweet story. I'm glad I got Harry/Ginny talking to herself right, cause while he is essentially Harry, he is needed to be slightly wiser than he was in life yet still retain his Harry-ness and also be Ginny's mind. It was quite a task.

And you're right, that line is pretty nice, even if it is about the weather

x Jacqui

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