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Review:ObsceneDevotion says:
This chapter was more interesting than the last. It's easy to feel Farren's state of mind which is all over the place, but at times it gets a bit confusing to read. You change from present to past tense when you're writing and it can be a bit confusing.

For example: (staring out with present tense) "Sirius screams as soon as he opens his bedroom door. (now it changes to past tense)The guy in question was, in fact, swinging on a chandelier. He had black hair and, from what I could see, hazel eyes behind a pair of glasses."

Other than that, this seems overall interesting, and I will look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Oh, joy! Another review from you! You're awesome! English was never my best subject so... (hehe) You see where that's from. You have no IDEA how many rejection notices I got back for crappy grammar! Oh, and thanks again! Just posted Chapter 3!

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