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Review:adahpfan says:
Hi, it's Buckbeak4Life from the forums,
I love how you managed to incorperate the theme of gardens and a garden party into the story so beautifully, all those little details like when you described her picking the carnation petals really added to it and gave it a bit of an edge!

When I gave you the pairing I wasn't really sure how and if it would work, but it ended up seeming so perfectly cannon that I've found myself wanting to read more and more Sirius/Petunia-s!

Your characterisation of Petunia is perfect, the best bit for me was when she said that she wouldn't shout up at him because she was "a respectable woman"! I also really like how you end it with Petunia leaving the wizarding world and acting like she'd forget about it, when you find out at the beginning that she never would.

The fact that as Lily was being proposed to, Petunia was losing the love of her life made me feel so sympathetic towards her. While Lily was seemingly getting everything she had ever desired, Petunia was going to be stuck with bad tempered, pigfaced Vernon, instead of amazing Sirius :'(

Thank you so much for entering my challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your challenge! All of the others really helped add to my storyline, but I NEVER would have attempted this pairing if you hadn't thrown it at me, and I'm so glad that I did. You say you'd like to read more, and at this point, I want to write more!

Ah, thank you so much. I've never really tried her character before, so I was a little wary of how she would turn out. I'm glad you found her to be canon, though; it gives me courage to try her again sometime!

Thank you so much for your lovely review! I had a great time writing for your challenge :)

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