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Review:Moments Reprieve says:
DAMMIT WOMAN! I spent the last few lines of this chapter practically screaming, "Kiss her, you twat waffle!" at my computer and what happens? He DOESN'T kiss her! UGH!
Anyway, lovely chapter all-in-all. I enjoyed the little seafood prank, which was really unique; I've never heard of anything like that before, so that was fun. New favorite insult is the 'twat waffle' - seriously, that one earned a serious chuckle. Your description of the concert was absolutely amazing, and of course Sirius is so much of a boy that he doesn't realize that stores close, and that Honeydukes wasn't about to stay open all night... I also enjoy how their dialogue is gradually growing more and more flirtatious as Avery grows bolder and Sirius gets used to her - it's really realistic!

Author's Response: Hahah I'm so pleased you like the word twat waffle. Do use it, it's surprisingly refreshing to use, and effective. And yes, the sexual tension must build! You of all people should know that, miss "I will hold out on you for 20+ chapters".

i'm glad you liked the chapter! And the concert was really easy to write. I've been to so many myself I just tried to remember what it felt like experiencing the music.

And I'm glad you like their development :) Thanks again Moments, you rule.

~Lauren

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