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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
Xenophilius cast his brother a brief glance, spotted the iridescent tendrils of sleep encircling him, and shrugged. He knew Astrelius would remember this moment only in cloudy stills, and therefore replied with an indefinite, "Outside" with the knowledge that it would not offend.

Loved this passage -- hazy waking up memories as "cloudy stills" , that's one of the best ways I have ever heard that mental state described. :)

The passage where Xeno rescues the little animal from the cage has both exciting action and character insight. It's too bad his empathy with animals doesn't work with people, or he might have had an easier time relating to his girlfriend.

Feel free to re request in the future, I really enjoyed the story so far!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :) I'll definitely re-request if I see a spot open.

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