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Review:SiriuslyPeeved says:
Xeno and his Muggle girlfriend -- so sad! I wonder whether he ever showed her any magic, and if so why not... It's even sadder that she thinks he's delusional, not just peculiar. I love how you have developed Xeno's character, his careful consideration of Astrelius' privacy when he wants to propose to Daphne shows that he does have more social awareness than his girlfriend gave him credit for.

I do wonder how the Muggle community the Lovegoods live near views them -- you may get to this in upcoming chapters, I'm just curious. Thanks for another lovely read. :)

Author's Response: In my mind, Xeno hasn't shown her magic yet. Just because they aren't super close yet. Him showing her his collection was the closest he has gotten, and since she shot him down at this step, he definitely wouldn't be comfortable showing her any real magic. Her loss.

I touch on it briefly (how the community views the Lovegoods). They're quite fond of the Lovegoods, but they don't know that they're wizards. They just think they're a rather delightful pair of brothers.

Thanks for the review!


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