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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
CONGRATULATIONS!!! This chapter has officially boosted this story up to a whole new level of amazing. Don't get me wrong, the first four chapters were really good and entertaining, but the background tale to Oliver and Keegan's relationship in this chapter just added a whole new dimension to the story. They've gone from being lovable and cliche to...a genuinely believable, meant-for-eachother duo that you can't help but fall in love with. Honestly, they're right up there on my all-time favourite HPFF story ships along with 'Delicate's' Rose and Scorpius and 'We Gryffies' James and Tegan!

I've never noticed before how funny Elbie and Miranda actually are. When Miranda threatened him with the possibility of him being forbidden to ever touch her body again I just burst out laughing!!! I know this is the least surprising element of the chapter but still, I have to ask, ADAM AND KEEGAN??? When? How? Why? I never considered him to be anything more significant in Keegan's life than an annoying teammate that she's fond of deep down. It'd be awesome to hear more about that; Adam's a really interesting and funny character, it'd be fun to learn more about him.

I felt so sorry for Keegan after hearing her story about her mother and Oliver; I just wanted to throw my arms around her and give her a big big hug. It's weird to imagine Oliver and Keegan being friends at one point in the past, but at the same time it adds a sense of realism to their dispute against one another; it's clear that there's an extremely significant reason for Keegan's strong dislike of him buried deep down inside which removes any opportunity for cliche.
Oliver seemed to show genuine concern for Keegan in this chapter near the end, having heard her reason for disliking him which I thought was so cute. It would have been so romantic if he'd grabbed her arm to stop her from leaving, swung her around to face him and kissed her passionately on the lips. We're ony 5 chapters in though lol, so unfortunately nothing will probably happen between the two for a while.

Poor Keegan, I hope the match goes well for her and Flint doesn't try anything (hopefully if he does, Wood will save her - I found it so cute that he chose to warn her about him).

I loved this! The story just gets better and better with every chapter!

- Katie -

Author's Response: Can you be ANY MORE awesome, Katie?? Oh my god, this review has officially made my entire life. I know I said that two reviews down but SERIOUSLY!! I love you I love this review I love all of the compliments... thank you so unbelievably much!! It means the world to me and once again I'm so sorry for the lateness of these replies!!! Thanks!

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