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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Oh Prea, I am in love with this story! It has to be one of my favourite Wood/OC fics on the site...and that's saying something because I've read a LOT of Oliver/OC stories. The thing I love the most about it would have to be the chemistry between Keegan and Wood; it's as addictive as sunshine and Diet Cola and...what do you call those chocolate biscuits with the chocoalte in the middle? As addictive as them. Well, you get the general gist of what I'm talking about right now. I'm excited now because I think he likes her. There's all of these subtle hints; like his interest in her feelings about Justin and the way he looks at her and that scene where he said that she was 'likeable'. Does the whole thing with Flint suggesting that Wood thinks she's fit count? I dunno, maybe lol. Though then again, maybe Wood only wants people to think that to make Keegan think that so that he can seduce her and affect her play in Quidditch. My brain's starting to hurt again lol. Never the less I love all of the mystery! You write Wood so well; everything from his dialogue to his behaviour makes me swoon - and Keegan's reactions to his subtle advances is comic class. Lol, she calls him all the names under the sun and he just grins to wind her up more; they're a match made in heaven and I desperately want them to get together.

You did a good job characterizaing Flint - he's such a slimy git in the books and it came through in this chapter as well. Eurgh, I hate girls like Amanda - Keegan's reaction to Amanda telling her to 'back the fuck off' was priceless; another reason why I think she's such an ACE character! I'm pretty sure that Keegan would own her in a fight if it came down to it; and that would just be hilarious to witness!

I love the Ravenclaw's so much. Still trying to match the names with the characters though. Ok, so Seamus is the cuddly big-bear type of guy (kind of reminds me of Emmett from Twilight for some weird reason). I really like him; he seems sweet and he has great chemistry with Keegan! Elbie is Miranda's boyfriend, and Miranda is Keegan's witty best friend right? Loved her and Lucy in this chapter; everytime they yelled WHAT and attracted all of that unwanted attention from the rest of the Great Hall I had to laugh out loud. And then there's Marcus and Lizzie who seem nice but I don't really know much about yet (except that Marcus got injured by the Weasley twins in their last match and they insist it wan't there fault but in fact Wood's), oh, and that they're going out of course. Adam is just one of those characters that I really really like. I know he's like quite a minor character, but I think that he has the potential for great comedy and if you included him in the story even more, then a LOT could be done with him.

Bless Justin, he's so cute. I think it's funny that Wood thinks its funny that he likes Keegan, but I suspect he's also a bit jealous too - well probably not anymore now that Keegan's confirmed that she doesn't like him - but still, that could suggest that he likes her. I definitely think Keegan needs to start fancying someone...and that person needs to be WOOD! I have a sneaking suspicion that Diggory may somehow become involved in the complex though - or was the timing of his arrival in the chapter just a coincidence?

I loved this chapter! I love this story! Off to read more right now. Really I should scold you for writing such a good story that it has now distracted me from my House Cup duties lol.

Seriously though, keep up the brilliant work!

- Katie -

Author's Response: Hahahaha Katie omg another review that has me LOLing... Thank you so very fricking much you are truly one of the best reviewers EVER. And ah I'm so happy how much you love my characters thank you so much!!! :D I dont even know what to say but I'm off to read more of your reviews and reply them even though I'm a year late in that :P

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