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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Oh boy oh boy oh boy! DID HE SERIOUSLY JUST TRY TO KISS HER??? This is going to frustrate me now, I can just tell. He might have been about to kiss her, or he could have been joking, or he could have been about to kiss her to try and get her on his side so that it'd be easier for him to beat her at Quidditch. My brain's taken a beating here lol. Does he like her? Or does he just enjoy making Keegan think that he likes her? I want him to like her, that's one thing I'm definitely sure about.

Ha lol, I just read your response to my first review. Yes, I would be FREAKING out big time! Villa, Casillas, Fabregas, Torres and Pedro all in suits; stuff that dreams are made of Prea!

Hmm, I wonder what's provoking all of this new attention from guys like Justin and Wood? That's so bloody typical lol; you go through your early teenage years and get completely ignored by the goodlooking guys right up until that age where you start to look like an adult, and then all of a sudden it's like they're noticing you for the first time. In all honesty, it was quite funny watching Keegan struggle to handle the whole situation, and her reaction to the kiss was just priceless. 'I like Justin Dodgson!' - Oh dear, that one's going to come back and bite her in the butt, I can just sense it!

Wooh, HOORAY FOR AGREEING THAT WOOD IS SMEXY! Love love love him in this! You can never tell whever he's flirting with Keegan or just messing with her (or maybe in some weird kind of twisted way he's doing both if that makes any sense at all); but either way I just love him - his character in this story is utterly swoon-worthy! Love him!

I can't compliment Keegan enough; she's the perfect protagonist for this story and without a doubt more than a match for Wood! I really liked how you wrote the Weasley twins as well; they were definitely in character. I can't wait to see how each of them intend to woo Keegan on their dates - my money's on George to win though lol ;)

I really liked this chapter; it definitely has to be my favourite one so far with a bullet; I just couldn't stop laughing. Also, I forgot to mention her brother in my previous reviews; he seems like a nice guy. I'm interested to see whether or not they'll be any subplots for him in the future that could bring out the 'big-sister' role in Keegan.

I also think that you wrote this really well, and the humor and diaogue in this chapter was also brilliant - there were definitely some laugh-out-loud moments in there, I can tell you.

- Katie -

Author's Response: Holy merlin, Katie... this review has totally just made my entire life. I love you so much for saying all those things it has definitely made me so giddy. Thank you and gahhh, I know right? Oliver is just so drool-worthy I adore him and Keegan is a little spitfire. She is definitely his match and then some ;) Hahaha aww well thank you, hun. I really hope you're still reading because there's plenty more to come! Thanks again!

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