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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Lol, another brilliant chapter here Prea! I just love the chemistry between Keegan and Wood; he obviously adores winding her up just as much as she adores hating him. Granted, their relationship borders ever so slightly on being cliche, but there's no harm in that - cliches can be fun when handled correctly, and I think you're doing a magnificent job on that front!

I also really adore the Ravenclaw Quidditch team; there's an interesting mix of personalities in there with the potential to make this story all the more interesting. I admire the fact that you haven't chosen to make your OC a Gryffie. I'm sick and tired of having to constantly read Oliver/OC material that focuses on the Gryffindor Quidditch team. It's refreshing to see some new characters in the lineup; I've already told you how much I love your OC's, so I'm very interested to see how you develop these ones. I've taken a particular liking to Adam; he strikes me as a wizarding world version of the infamous Chuck Bass from Gossip Girl (Ed Westwick is practically drool-worthy).

I admit that I've seen the whole Oliver/OC, love/hate scenario many times before in previously-read stories, but I really like the twist that you've decided to put on it. This Quidditch camp thing strikes me as interesting; the teachers are practically forcing Oliver and Keegan to work together (and I'm guessing that that won't end particularly well knowing those two). It sounds like the perfect opportunity for chaos and scheming if you ask me, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

And the ante sounds great as well; hopefully there'll be a nice little romantic outcome to that ball involving two certain characters in this story - again, I'll just have to wait and see.

Also, you've written this brilliantly. I really adore the dialogue used by all of the characters; it's so witty and fun to read. Don't dare change a thing lol! This story is brilliant so far!

- Katie -

Author's Response: Katie!! I dont know if you'll even read this since you said you were leaving hpff :( and I'm sorry I never responded till now (but I took a hiatus as well) but I appreciate this so much!! I love your reviews.. thank you!! And I know a little cliche but... hopefully I made it work?? I dont know why I keep doing love/hate stories but theyre just so much fun! :P Thanks again!! Really miss you around here!

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