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Review:leannemariesnape says:
Review 6/7.
This was very well written too. I couldn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes, which makes it a really nice read.

I really love the relationship between Victoire and Dominique- I thought that it was really nice. I really liked how you put that they got on well, when they weren't arguing- I think that is so true with siblings!

I was also interested in the characterisation of Victoire (got the right character this time ;) ). I thought that her character was actually very realistic, and her need for perfection and control is added into the story- her personality shows through with her argument with Teddy, which I liked.

Oh, and I also thought that It was a nice touch that Teddy could draw paralells with Remus/Tonks- and did something about it. Plus, I think that the kiss was really well written too.

I'm only aware of the really well known Taylor Swift songs, so I don't actually know the song but, the lyrics were used nicely, regardless. :)

Leanne

Author's Response: thank you! im glad the sisters were right - i dont have a sister myself so this was dificult! if you like victoire here, i hope you read more about her in "All You Need Is Love"!

Thanks again!


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